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Lesson 4

Do you know...
  • Where are the important ideas in a passage?
  • Steps in writing an effective summary
If not, we suggest you start from Lesson 3.  Click here to go to Lesson 3.



In this lesson, you will learn:
  • What is an acceptable summary?
  • How to Improve your summary?
Let's start now !

 

Task 4.1  What is an acceptable summary?

Read this paragraph.
 

    The territory of Hong Kong consists of Hong Kong Island, the Kowloon Peninsula, the New Territories, and 235 outlying islands, totalling 1,078 square kilometres.  It is situated on the southeastern coastline of China, facing the South China Sea.  To its north is the province of Guangdong, the provincial capital of Guangzhou, which is 135 km away from Hong Kong. China's capital city, Beijing, is about 2,000 km further north. The territory measures 38 km from north to south and 50 km from east to west.

Look at the four ways of summarising the passage above.  Which of these is the best?

(A) 
Hong Kong consists of Hong Kong Island, Kowloon Peninsula, New Territories, and 235 outlying islands, totalling 1,078 square kilometres. It is situated on southeastern coastline of China, facing South China Sea.
(C) 
The total area of Hong Kong is 1,078 square kilometres, including Hong Kong Island, the Kowloon Peninsula, the New Territories, and outlying islands.  It is located at southeastern China.
(B) 
Hong Kong's territory consists of Hong Kong Island, the Kowloon Peninsula, the New Territories, and 235 outlying islands, totalling 1,078 square kilometres, and it's situated on China's southeastern coastline, facing the South China Sea.
(D) 
Situated at southeastern China, Hong Kong is made up of Hong Kong Island, the Kowloon Peninsula, the New Territories, and outlying islands.


 

Task 4.2  Improving your summary

dividing summary into paragraphs
restructuring/re-ordering ideas
writing a cohesive piece of discourse
jigsaw exercise

Under construction
 
 

To sum up...

Excellent.  You have finished Lesson 4.

You have learned what an acceptable summary is.
Also, you have learned how to improve your summary.

Get ready for the last lesson ?

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